第三人称:从旁观者的角度来叙述事件,以客观的写作方法,反映事件中各个人物的感受以及见解。
叙述的内容:一篇记叙文应该注意交代清楚事情的始末细节,时间、地点等,一般采用一般过去式。
叙述的方法:
以时间为线索,按照时间的顺序展开(例如北京卷2009年作文,植树活动)。
以地点为线索,以地点的转移为顺序来展开。
以事件的发展过程为线索来展开。
以事物的象征意义为线索展开。
以人物的思想行为以及认知过程来展开。
因此要求考生在写作的过程中宏观思路要明确,重视谋篇布局、合理的划分段落,并且要依据提示准确的把握时态。合理的展开想象,用标志性的语言引起老师的注意,最后通过议论升华主题。
例子:
假设你是红星中学高二(1)班的学生李华,利用上周末的时间帮助祖父母安排了去北戴河的旅行。请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序,写一篇英文周记,叙述你从准备到送行的全过程。
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注意:
1. 周记的开头已为你写好。
2. 词数不少于60。
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. ________
答案:
One possible version:
Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaile, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the train station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents reed, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them on the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey。